greyeyedfire
5c3n3 p0w3r
Join date: Nov 2008
1,545 IQ
#1
Somewhere, she mistook
me for a good example
and followed me home
seventh_angel
So-Called New-Age(d) Poet
Join date: Aug 2007
3,144 IQ
#2
Oh you and your tiny, one phrase poems...!

I missed you posting in here. This was very much you. I'm just pretty sure this could be syntactically altered to give it a bigger punch. This is because the point of this is that she mistook you for a good example, and you finish with what doesn't matter that much (when it's such a small thing like this). However I can't alter it without making it sound weird. Plus, it's your tiny poem and it's what you do best, so I'll leave it to your opinion.

Stick around !