#3
Pretty good, pretty good. But I feel maybe the Rhythm guitar track could be turned down just a little. Doesn't really drown out the rest of the sound, but it overwhelms the other tracks just a bit. I liked especially how you incorporated the melody all throughout the song. Was very interesting to hear. Solid riffs all in all. All I can advise is to turn down the Rhythm guitar just a tad, and maybe the keyboard. Otherwise, almost perfect track!

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