#1
https://soundcloud.com/the-left-turns/oblivion-i-arrangement-demo

I'm having trouble figuring out where everything should go, how many times to repeat the "chorus", where to put what layers, etc. Please take a listen and let me know how you'd do it, what could/should be changed, and what can be improved. Also, all other criticism is welcomed (tones, mix, overall sound, all that stuff) Just bear in mind this is a rough track with minimal EQing, no bass, and just rough sounding in general

Thanks a bunch!
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