Just recorded a new song. I'm wondering if anyone can let me know of post-production/EQ'ing tips because I feel like an infant floundering about when I am doing post-production stuff. Anyway, thanks.

I think you should improve the panning of the mix, and that fizzy fuzzy guitar tone.
Also, try to make the vocals (not the pitched down part) louder and more compressed.
Back to the beginning, dont let the pitched down voice get distorted, and try to make the transition to the song better, or at least at better timing. (Liked the concept though!)

Please check out my new demo and critique (mixing and song)