#1
the world is a-
lot to consider, so,
in order to avoid
getting dizzy,
i stick to ships &
other little thoughts;
like how to peel an
orange more efficiently, or
how to develop the
ability to look through you
while looking at
you. i don’t think that it’s
necessarily possible,
but i also don’t think that it’s
necessary impossible;
like when we first saw the
sea & you said,
“there could never be anything in
the world more beautiful than this,”
but then i wrote this poem,
which is.
#2
I don't really know anything about writing or lyrics but I really enjoyed that... apart from the last line. I expected some sort of big ending I guess but I kind of felt cut short somehow? Anyway, overall, I enjoyed it. Keep writing!