#1
randomly sat down and wrote this in 15 minutes

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eKmZwZDlli0

"Still Young"

i want you to hold me
like you used to
when we were young

i want you to touch me
like you used to
when we were young

Life's been changing
seems like ive been making
less progress than i ought


i want you to love me
like you used to
when were young

i want you to say my name
delicately baby
we were young
oh so young

and its game
i thought you were playing
but for time its for keeps

i wanna forget you
like you still do
and I was young
and I'm still young
My Gear:
-Fender American 1962 Stratocaster Reissue
-1984 Marshall JCM 800 2204
-Ibanez Wh-10 Original
-Boss DS-2 Distortion
-Boss CE-5 Chorus
Last edited by GuitarGuy2387 at May 12, 2013,
#3
Very pleasant guitar as a result it makes this quite a easy listening track, lyrics could maybe use some content based tweaking but if you wrote this in 15 minutes I can hardly crit as that's a fair effort so overall there's some nice stuff going on here.
I just posted one of my bands new recordings up if you could check it out that would be awesome - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1601368
You feeling lucky?