#2
Considering the record circumstances this is pretty damn good! It fits the desert rock sound pretty spot on. Very good, natural progression; no weird or unnecessary curveballs or changes in the music. Sounds like it's pretty influenced by Kyuss, which is always a good thing! if you got this into a better recording setup you'd have a really kick ass songs (vocals as well, but I fully understand the difficulties with that part, unless of course you can sing lol)

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1602087
Music must be honest to be timeless.
#4
I like the guitar riffs (particularly the run down thing you do to break up sections eg at 1:17) my question is what are you going to do with them? I was trying to think of some vocal lines that would fit well and really struggling. Perhaps you'll have more luck!

Kind of reminded me of hawkwinds 'born to go' (definitely a good thing), it would do well in that sort of trippy setting I think.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=31469207#post31469207
#5
Thank you for reviewing my songs.

Maybe it's just my laptop, but the guitar tone really left a lot to be desired. Riffs are cool and the drums play well with them. I actually liked the riff s at 1:18, and would suggest that you may not lyrics at that part.

It's funny that in the related section on your soundcloud page that it has a STP song, when that was kinda the first thing I thought of, lol.

Thx again
#6
I like your riffs starting at 1:18 and also the contrasting guitar tones starting at 2:21. Are you using a 7 string, or drop tuning? I could envision some lyrics over some parts of it, other parts are a bit too busy... I won't comment on the sound quality, as you said, but overall, it's solid!
Could you go to my thread and leave a comment there (just a comment on the first instrumental link is fine):https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1594334
#7
The guitar is downtuned a minor third to C#. I agree about the quality. It could have been much better but until I get better recording program thats what I'm left with. Thanks for the feedback!