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Quote by Gar Tint
Hi TheOkadaWard... For the first minute I liked it...then it got a bit repetitive... which is a pity as it starts with a quite interesting pattern lick. I listened to your other pieces on soundcloud and you have lots of good ideas....I think adding some short energetic soloing phrases, legato style, would help give your pieces more dimension. Great effort though!


Thanks for the feedback and I appreciate the honesty, that was exactly the kind of constructive criticism I was looking for. I'll definitely keep that in mind for that next time I write!