#2
The piano transition at the start didn't sound natural but the piano part itself was beautiful. I didn't like the clean guitar melody. The part ~0:31 was really nice but then it transitioned awkwardly to the synths. I would have preferred if the clean guitar ~1:17 had a softer tone and less attack. The percussion ~1:56 sounded very artificial.
The basslines through out the song were good. The piano sounded great.
There are a lot of good ideas here but I don't think they flow well together.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=31473351#post31473351