So this is a new song I'm working on, and mainly what I'm asking is what you think of the over-all flow of this piece, the key point being the transition into the last part of this short demo snippet.


The relevant parts start at around 0:55.

If you want me to crit your song, just leave a link and I'll do so.
That's an amazing piece man, I didn't bother paying attention to the time, just listened to it as a whole and it all flowed just fine, keep working hard, you've earned yourself a fan. (Y)