#3
You've got very good timing and excellent technique man! Great cover overall.

The one thing I thing you could work on to really make it pop is to work on making your vibrato more expressive. It'll change the whole atmosphere if you can make your guitar sing a bit more, plus all the rest of your playing is there already! Good stuff.

Crit for crit? - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1602445
#4
Superb playing, you are a SUPER-FAST and accurate player. Maybe you could mix your guitar a little bit up so we can you hear it more precisely.

But good job keep it up.