#1
There was a time when Madii told me all
about her dreams, her fears, her favorite things
I ruined it
now I can only listen to her sleep
fearing the things she dreams of me
#2
Great economy in your language here. You packed a nice little arc and story into very little, which I always appreciate.

This may fall on deaf ears, since I know l know lots of folks dislike over-punctuating their poems, but I felt there was more potential for a strong rhythm to this piece than your presentation gives it with the very minimal punctuation. My two cents anyhow. But its short and sweet as is!
#4
'of' in the last line isn't quite clicking. 'for' seems like the obvious choice but maybe there's something too hands-on-ish and sinister about that?
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Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me
#5
^ ditto the 'of'
マリ「しあわっせはーあるいってこないだーからあるいってゆっくんだねーん 
いっちにっちいっぽみーかでさんぽ
 さーんぽすすんでにっほさっがるー 
じーんせいはっわんつー!ぱんち・・・


"Success is as dangerous as failure. Hope is as hollow as fear." - from Tao Te Ching