Interesting piece. Really liked the Chorus, and the contrasting poppy tunes and somewhat grim lyrics are a really nice contrast, and I have to say I really like the slight (English?) accent in the vocals. Adds a lot of charm. The ending was oddly abrupt, like kind of cutting off mid song. Maybe give that part just a bit more depth, even if it's meant just to end on a single note.

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