#1
Hey Guys!

Took me awhile but I finally have a song finished. Its more on the proggy side of metal. I was trying to experiment with making smoother transitions with the time changes, and key changes.

Crit 4 Crit Obviously.

Let me know what you think.

Also, the section that is "Better Transition?" Is where I believe I need to rewrite, if you guys have any great ideas. Throw them my way

Thanks!
Attachments:
Rise Off the Shores.gp5



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#2
about that transition, this is what I came up with... (I was just having fun)

And about the whole song, its fantastic. I don't kow if I see right but i feel some Between the Buried and me influences maybe? Anyway great work man!
Attachments:
Rise Off the Shores_modb154.gp5
#3
Thanks man!

A lot more Dream Theater influence honestly



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Thanks man!

A lot more Dream Theater influence honestly


It was pretty much a Dream Theater song
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#5
ah Dream Theater seems a better comparison indeedddd!!!!! I only listened to 2-3 singles and their last album so it didn't strike my mind.
#6
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It was pretty much a Dream Theater song



Ill take that as a compliment since they are my favorite group



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#7
How do you write drums like that... Wow.
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#8
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How do you write drums like that... Wow.



Thanks man!

Usually, I outline what beats I want accented first. Then I write the guitar, bass, what ever riffs over that. Then I just sing, hum, slap my desk etc to figure out which drum beats sound the coolest



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