#2
Pretty cool ! The only thing really bothering me is the drums. Make the drums have a little groove going on, now it's pretty quantized/robotic.

The guitars hit hard, you've got interesting riffs and they're mixed well. I hope you're gonna make a full song out of these ideas, it's still a bit all-over-the-place.

Good job.
#3
It lacked bass. And somehow it felt like everything was panned in the center (even though they weren't). Did you pan your guitars all the way left and right?

The elevator jazz part in the end was great. What can I say? It was kind of trippy and there were some cool ideas.

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