That was really good! It had a RHCP feel to it. It also sounded a bit like Closing Time by semisonic. If I had to pick one thing out of it that didn't sound great it probably would be the guitar scratching. They seemed just a bit out of time and kinda weird. Other than that it was a really good song. Keep up the good work!
First listen: love the guitar riffing. A lot of good ideas here. Drums could be better/louder. Chord progression was like...a total mimic of closing time lol. Things to work on are timing/execution, and vocal tone. Overall I think the writing was excellent and I really really enjoyed your guitar work.

crit me? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1603920
Too cool for a signature.