#1
Hi, everyone. I just finished recording my first song. I'd like to know what everyone thinks. The quality isn't great and I know it's a little pitchy and for some reason my mics picked up some Facebook notification noises, but it's my songwriting i want critiqued

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#2
Sounds good! Only things that really got me were the right panned vocals, and the acoustic sounded a little dry (Maybe add some more treble and a bit of reverb?)
#3
try doubling up the guitar and pan one all left and one all right then keep the vocals in the middle. Other than the panning the playing sounds great
#4
It was a little pitchy at times, but otherwise not bad. Same comments as the others - the right-panned vocals were a little odd. They should be centered. The guitar was dry - some reverb would help. Also, try wetting your fingertips for a few minutes prior to playing. It's an old trick to reduce some of the string noise as you change positions. Just make sure you remove the excess water with a towel prior to playing.
#5
Quote by broken-frets
try doubling up the guitar and pan one all left and one all right then keep the vocals in the middle. Other than the panning the playing sounds great


^This. Maybe reverb the vocals out, but pretty good. Re record and repost!