#1
So, my girlfriend just broke up with me the other night, and I've decided to start writing some songs. This is definitely a break up sort of song, which is pretty sappy. I'm just wondering if I should just scrap it though. I don't have much at all at the moment, but I just want to see what you think. Here's what I have so far...


No matter what I do, you're still there all the time
In my dreams, in my eyes, in the back of my mind
I can drink away the pain until I'm blind
These cigarettes and whiskey are my best friends tonight


By the way, I'm pretty terrible at writing lyrics, so I feel like with all this free time I might as well work on something.
I can honestly say I have really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like.


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#2
sounds like you are off to a good start. let me know how it goes. also what kind of genre is it going to be?
I just want to know that I did all I could with what I was given.