Definitely hear the old Green Day influence! The vocals sound like Mike Semesky, pretty awesome as he's one of my favorite vocalists. The song itself is constructed very well, dynamic and interesting. Very Guns and Roses solo, I dig it. The production is also good, and that's coming from iPad speakers lol.

Overall it's just a solid song, I don't see it lacking much really. The vocalists sound doesn't necessarily match the music, but they've still got a damn good voice!

C4C? It's quite different from your own music, so feel free to pick parts of the song to critique. I'm more concerned with the last third of the song https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=31574952#post31574952
Music must be honest to be timeless.
Intro guitar riff: had to hear it a few times before it grew on me (mostly because of the interaction with the electric bass: sounded odd to me initially), but liked the guitar tone. I liked the harder guitar riffs better. I think the vocals are rather good. Audio quality is pretty good. Drums are good. Please review my music at this link:

Nice! I love the vocals, they aren't really matched with the guitar, but it kind of gives it a new feel instead of the typical style for this kind of music. Sounds like a mix of all kinds of different influences. Awesome song dude
Nice sound you have going on there.. I like the vocalist, but there's a bit of reverb (I think?) that I don't like too much although he has a good voice. The guitar solo should be a little more pronounced and less muddy in my opinion. I like the song overall!

Can you crit mine?