I'm pretty new to songwriting, and have tried to write something decent. Here it is, can I have some advice on how to improve it and what mistakes I made?
Last edited by zack7521 at Oct 17, 2014,
the intro sounds...eh, strange to me. the bass feels lost from the get-go. and...is this supposed to be played on the piano? it looks like you just wrote a guitar tab with those voicings and put it as grand piano so it wouldn't sound like a wasp