#1
Hey guys,

Would love some feedback, and will return the favor

This was a "just for fun" recording i did at home.

Was going for a chill out/mellow type vibe

Thanks

Tune is called Ice Planet

Soundcloud:

https://soundcloud.com/evil-will/ice-planet
Ibanez RG570
USA Strat
Epi Les Paul

Peavey Classic 30
Epi Valve Jnr
Laney LV200
Boss ME50
Daddy O
DC Solid Metal
GNX 3000
#2
Pretty good improv.

I kind of wish there was an underlying rhythm or bass guitar.

Would be awesome if you would of had the synth at the end kind of double up some of your leads.

Was this recorded with your Ibanez or Strat?
My Soundcloud dudes
Recording gear:
Yahama Hs8
Saffire Pro 40
Shure Sm57
Shure Sm7b

Guitar gear :
Ebmm BFR7
Axe fx XL+
Walrus audio Janus
Ibanez Ergodyne
Black Market Custom cab
#4
The guitar tone was a little too harsh for a mellow feel in my opinion. I also agree that the song could use something underneath it all to help feel out the space. It just feels really empty, especially with the drums hard-panned to the right. Too much empty space in the left stereo. The guitar playing is good, just the song itself feels rather empty and overly spacious.

Please critic back https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1605035