#1
This is the first thing Ive recorded in months, I wasnt able to play guitar due to personal reasons, anyway this is just some random progression thing I made, I hope you like it
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#3
Add other instruments and write a song based on the ideas you have here. I don't think it works as a song on its own. It could also be an intro to a song, though then you might want to make it a bit shorter. Sounded Chinese.

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#4
Yea, I agree with above. This needs to be completed with other instruments / lyrics. This could probably work as a good song on its own. Otherwise, good sound going on.

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#6
I agree with the other posters.. This definitely needs more instruments to accompany it but it does have potential to make a really cool relaxed, mellow song!
Was there some Buckethead influence in there?
Some notes at the very beginner reminded me of 'Soothsayer'!

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