#1
it was only a glance but it could have been a linger
looking at you from between my hands in a way that
your face was framed by my fingers

but there were people in the shadows
and I just wanted to leave them there

going home I grabbed a taxi and there you were
as delicious as a kit kat wrapped in bacon they don't
make them like that anymore, anywhere

but in the front seat was her 007
and I presumed that would be that

fool of me to breath in and catch your scent
(do you want to be corrupt?)
it made me less of a gentleman
the rule you see is half made-up on the spot
(do you want to cause the cut?)
I moved in when I should have moved on

she was only a friend but she'd never turned that quick
and afterwards I had to put two fingers to my neck
to ensure I hadn't just been bit

but the puncture wound was missing
and that was kind of disappointing

you've got to feel a little low when you hope she's actually a vampire
and not a mistake

fool of me to breath in and catch your scent
(do you want to be corrupt?)
it made me less of a gentleman
the rule you see is half made-up on the spot
(do you want to cause the cut?)
I moved in when I should have moved on

I don't ever want to be your friend
but show me your bed and I'm sure to bend
it's not exactly fair, but temptation finds a way
of working in the dark and not giving you a say

I don't ever want to be your friend
but show me your bed and I'm sure to bend
it's not exactly fair, but temptation finds a way
of working in the dark and not giving you a say

I don't ever want to be your friend
but show me your bed and I'm sure to bend
it's not exactly fair, but temptation finds a way
of working in the dark and not giving you a say


#2
The last stanza beginning with "i dont ever want to be your friend" is very clever and i love it! The only line i didnt like was the kit kat line. It felt out of place to me. Might work if you are a bit more vague ex "as delicious as childhood nostalgia" or something like that.

Great job overall!