#1
https://soundcloud.com/john-monsoon/newshabang-raw-mix

So I recorded this recently with my producer who usually just records grime artists but yeah - I just wanted a bit of feedback really... I wrote it over a year ago but I could still do with some constructive criticism. I'm recording again in 8 days time and have some more recent material ready to record, but I'm happy to re-record this song if you guys have any pointers on room for improvement. I imagine "some form of chorus?" May crop up in your comments. :P
#4
Oops, sorry - first thread! I'm not too down on the forum rules... I shall move this there in that case.