Lets start with your video here. Your lighting needs to come from the front, not behind. This will make your video itself much more clear.

The one common issue with this style of video (acoustic guitar and ambient vocals) is that the mix is hard to control, because you yourself have to be constant with how loud you sing and play guitar. Your vocals sound great but they are masked slightly by the guitar, maybe play a little lighter or sing a little louder. I think it be better if you sing louder but if that colume is where your voice tops out then just play a little lighter, or just use your thumb to strum and don't use a pick.

Guitar playing seemed right on and your vocals as I said above were great.

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Nice to hear a new generation still playing Neil's songs.

I thought you captured the feel of the song nicely. Keep it up.