Hi, long time lurker here!

So I've been trying to learn how to play music/compose as a hobby for the past few months and this is my first try at a more metal-inspired song that I've been working on the past few days.

Hoping to get some critique of things to improve, thanks.
Last edited by tritao at Jul 1, 2013,
Not bad for the 1st song. Though I wouldn't call that metal, it's sounds more like rock. The song definitely has its feel, I like how the last bridge changes into the final chorus. But you'd better make and ending for the chorus or put a fade out

It's strange how you notated bass, why didn't you just make a bass track tuned EADG, instead of a guitar one tuned GbBEADGBE?

Also, put a Guitar Pro version in the thread's title.
Thanks for the feedback, will add a proper ending.

And yeah, the bass is notated in a weird way, mostly due to me being noob and re-using guitar tracks for bass purposes, will fix.
hey man , here's my crit

first id like to say id suggest u put the master volume on 0 db to make it sound less "noisy"

Intro :
Interesting stuff , though the melody sounds very plain and basic at 17-24 , the guitars that come in at 25 sound pretty cool

Verse :
Nice melody , thats more like it

Chorus :
Sounds exactly the same as the verse apart from the few things u add , i suggest rewritting this part since its imo the most important part of a good metal song.

after than that its mostly the same stuff rehashed.

for a first song this is very good , dont get me wrong , though you have much to learn still.

Can u crit In Flanders Fields for me ?