#1
Hey friends, so this may sound cheesy, but it comes from the heart, and i hope it's ok.. anyways, it would be nice if you could tell me what I could do better, critics are always welcome Oh yes, i imagined this as a calm acoustic piece.

thanks for saving me
thanks for building me up,
when the world has beat me down
and for holding me now

i now, it's never really easy
but you're always there for me
i know, you've got your own problems,
you have always time for me

i feel save with you around,
you keep my feet on the ground
you are, what makes me carry on, carry on

thanks for saving me
thanks for building me up,
when the world has beat me down
and for holding me now

i look into your big blue eyes,
i see them change color
my pain, it slowly fades away,
all thanks to you

i feel save with you around,
you keep my feet on the ground
you are, what makes me carry on, carry on

thanks for saving me
thanks for building me up,
when the world has beat me down
and for holding me now
#2
Really good in my opinion, and cool that it came from your heart. This is like a lot of the songs I have written but never did anything with.