caw1
have guitar will travel
Join date: Mar 2009
90 IQ
#3
Well played. Some of the really fast stuff seems muddy/sloppy. I would love to see you cover the whole song!

c4c https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1607726
onemetalhead92
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2011
50 IQ
#4
Big bang theory thanks buddy \M/

@caw 1 .. Maybe , I did my best in it and soon I will make the whole track
Gear:
-Jackson DK2M [Black]
-Vox Tonelab ST
-Randall RX-15M

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Cheers \m/ \m/
DiminishDarknut
Registered User
Join date: Apr 2011
10 IQ
#5
The slides at 0:19 were great! The faster chromatic part at the end was pretty good too, and only a few of the descending runs were kinda off, I think it was at 0:34 or so. But that is just being picky. Excellent tone, real thick but articulate. I couldn't tell if you had reverb or not, but it sounded good man. Great job!
lilhurt
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2007
10 IQ
#6
Overall it was pretty good, the thing I would recommend working on the most is your vibrato, it was there but it wasn't very strong. Also, when you got to the fast section, your picking got a little sloppy, but that is an easy fix with a little practice. Everything else was good, the notes you played were correct and your tone was good.

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1610997