Needs to be better in time with the flute and then when the chords kick in it just goes all kindsa out of whack. Also don't call your band Saffron Sin it sounds like some sort of rapey code word.

Your name however, is that of a true viking. Look within yourself to find the gifts mighty Wotan has bestowed upon you. By look within yourself I mean stop shaving and cutting your hair and not drinking.
Vinland, Vinland Über Alles

"Why do they still call me a warlord? And mad? All I want to do is create the perfect genetic soldier!"
I can see where you're going but the lack of timing more or less ruins it. Have you considered using a metronome or a clicktrack for recording?