Hey all, this is my first time using the boards here in a few years, so forgive me if I'm not on the correct section (though I think I am). I few months back I started getting into acoustic guitar a bit more and wrote some acoustic tracks that are kind of simple. The one I want to ask about is one I particularly like and am hoping for some feedback. Just some background to it, lyrically it's about a child who is sick and is in a hospital, and the song is told through his perspective. If you can get through the first few lines I do think I improve somewhat with my vocals, though I fully acknowledge I'm not a singer.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy the song (oh, the song is called "Snow Angels") http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bGIXkibSrUM#at=10 .