Quote by caw1
The audio doesnt work so im not sure whats going on here.

What? the audio doesn't work? Retry, I checked if the file works on soundcloud and it works ... .
Quote by caw1
I think soundcloud doesnt work for me on this pc Ill try at home later.

Ok, don't worry man
in my opinion you should work on the bending technique: tuning and vibrato. Also, you tend to "mess up" the rhythmic division in the fast alternate picking parts, especially in the end. Work it back up with a metronome and you'll be fine
What lxar said about the timing at alternate picking parts. That was what mainly stuck out to me, but it was still a pretty good listen. Keep it up!