Not a fan of the echo. The vocals are a bit muddy. There's a bit of rehab to your style. Its alright, I think I would rather hear your flow over something original, I'd also like to see you in the video, not just a pic.

Work on your lyrics a little bit, there's some in there that just dont fit. just my 2 cents.

c4c https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1604915