#1
Hey guys.

I got a project in the making, which will feature a trilogy of songs, all about the same thought, with the same "lyrics", although I did not sing yet.

The thought behind it, is to see if I´m able to write different kinds of music, all about the same topic.

This is the third song in that triolgy, don´t ask me, why it´s the first to be finished.

I don´t know about this C4C stuff, but I will be thankful if you could tell your opinion on that.

https://soundcloud.com/av0n23/something


Hope you enjoy!
#2
Nice! I liked it and how it progressed. It had a good flow.

But it would have been cool if you had come back to the intro riff in the end. So maybe try using the intro riff as an outro riff as well.

Oh, and the last part reminded me of Black Sabbath.

I'm not sure if the song even needs singing. And if it's going to have some lyrics, I think it should be a bit longer.

Here are my songs if you are interested in hearing my music. Leave a comment if you want, not necessary.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1601304
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1603638
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1605509
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1606406
Quote by AlanHB
Just remember that there are no boring scales, just boring players.

Gear

Bach Stradivarius 37G
Charvel So Cal
Fender Dimension Bass
Hartke HyDrive 210c
Ibanez BL70
Laney VC30
Tokai TB48
Yamaha FG720S-12
Yamaha P115
Last edited by MaggaraMarine at Jul 8, 2013,
#3
Hey there!

Thanks for you words!

Actually, if this was an actual full-length song, it would´ve been way longer and I actually thought about putting the intro as an outro again.

I also don't think that singing is really needed on this one. I concentrate more one the second song for that.

Funny, I thought it was a lot like Sabbath too, but, and don't kill me for that, I don't like Sabbath that much.


I kinda like that vibe you got in your songs. They have that kind of...I don't know. I just like that feeling of it. Good work!
#4
Quote by av0n
Hey there!

Thanks for you words!

Actually, if this was an actual full-length song, it would´ve been way longer and I actually thought about putting the intro as an outro again.

I also don't think that singing is really needed on this one. I concentrate more one the second song for that.

Funny, I thought it was a lot like Sabbath too, but, and don't kill me for that, I don't like Sabbath that much.


I kinda like that vibe you got in your songs. They have that kind of...I don't know. I just like that feeling of it. Good work!

It's the "tongue-in-cheekness" in my songs, I know, lol.
Quote by AlanHB
Just remember that there are no boring scales, just boring players.

Gear

Bach Stradivarius 37G
Charvel So Cal
Fender Dimension Bass
Hartke HyDrive 210c
Ibanez BL70
Laney VC30
Tokai TB48
Yamaha FG720S-12
Yamaha P115