skatooter
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Join date: May 2004
832 IQ
#2
I quite enjoyed this, has a Bon Jovi feel about it. Loved the contrast between chorus and verse and the singer has a brilliant voice, I was confused why you said 'Hard Rock' at the start but the chorus cleared that up lol. Great job guys!

C4C https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=31662442#post31662442

There is a word missing at 1:23 just incase you want to change that.
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ryan19
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Join date: Jul 2005
838 IQ
#4
Thanks guys !! Going to crit your songs now
ryan19
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Join date: Jul 2005
838 IQ
#6
Was wondering when someone was going to notice the Zeppelin vibe lol. you can definitely hear the Jimmy Page influence in my acoustic playing. Thanks for checking out my stuff, appreciate it!!
ChrisHiggs
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Join date: May 2013
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#7
Quote by ryan19
Was wondering when someone was going to notice the Zeppelin vibe lol. you can definitely hear the Jimmy Page influence in my acoustic playing. Thanks for checking out my stuff, appreciate it!!


Definite Page influence ha! It's sweet. Fancy checking out my stuff? Links below man. Cheers.
aaron aardvark
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Join date: Mar 2010
4,986 IQ
#8
ryan19,
Yes, I can hear the Page influence now that you mention it. Sounds rather nice (guitar & vocals) on the mellow parts (my favorite parts, the early harder parts are OK, but not as good for me; I like the later hard part better). Drums are good. Nice lead guitar! Nice song overall! Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1609249
Innercelph
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Join date: May 2009
499 IQ
#11
Really like this one dude! Agree with the comments about the Zeppelin-esque feel to it, great job with the dynamic shifts, despite their contrasts they all fit together really well. Production overall is superb, only thing I'd suggest changing is maybe a slightly wetter lead guitar sound.

C4C please - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1610260