#2
Great job with mixing the gunshots with the guitar line.. I love the guitar line, its dark and moody. Overall, its a real nice tune. Something that could be done is adding one note or two with the intro guitar lines to add some variations. The solo-ish thing towards the ends is the best part of the song. I like love how the song ends, I'm a sucker for songs that build up slowly and ends well ! ]

PS: Could you review my 1 take instrumental here? :
https://soundcloud.com/radio-paradise/anticipation


#3
Quote by arnob_oblique
Great job with mixing the gunshots with the guitar line.. I love the guitar line, its dark and moody. Overall, its a real nice tune. Something that could be done is adding one note or two with the intro guitar lines to add some variations. The solo-ish thing towards the ends is the best part of the song. I like love how the song ends, I'm a sucker for songs that build up slowly and ends well ! ]

PS: Could you review my 1 take instrumental here? :
https://soundcloud.com/radio-paradise/anticipation


Thanks for the comments man, I'll leave feedback for yours on SC.
#5
Love the Morse Code intro. Lead in is a bit long. I kept expecting it to get to the point. It did finally. I would shorten the intro. Maybe cut it in half then get to the driving guitar riff. I like the riff alot. Nice guitar playing. I could see this as the background music in a movie. Well done overall.

Would you take a listen to "The Dance"

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1609172
#6
Some cool ideas, especially with the production, and the harmony guitars. Overall though I feel like it just seems like a vague outline of a song. So much more could be going on, or least could venture into a few other directions, or at least added other musical layers. The song is more about the effects itself, takes about a minute and a half before any instruments even kick in.
The riff is cool though, and it was definitely well recorded. Overall I think it has a lot of potential.

C4C? - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1609992