#2
Well, let me get the bad out of the way first;

intro was pretty generic. not too bad, but nothing special. the riff starting on measure 8 has potential, but i feel it could be a lot better. plus it feels like theres too much going on at once. the dynamics (volume) for the drums change up in measures 22-29 lastly, idk what "32" is supposed to be for tux guitar/guitar pro drums, but its pretty damn annoying. get rid of it please

now for the good

overall i really liked this. rough start, but as soon as measure 22 kicked in (with the exception of whatever the hell that 32 thing is supposed to be), i felt the magic, especially the harmony on measure 32. really ambient and sweet sounding!