#1
my posture is everything wrong with the world(bloated
perceptions oil
spill over a
tilted pelvis, down
mismatched thighs,

blotting acne imperfections
with tattoo ink.

rolled shoulders,
papercurled like
social anorexia skin,

stretched around a
chest hollow from
spoken dyslexia ribs)i'm scared
that when my spine unfurls
the pins and needles will
get even worse-
-er
#2
wat
o()o

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#4
And here I thought you'd put a costume finish on your guitar that showed an x-ray of your spine. This is much weirder. And I like the original thought better.
#5
Did I get lost in some weird part of UG?
"-How do you feel about libraries?"
"-I hate them."
"-Well, not anymore!"
*Cue commercial tune*
Track Library! - A library, for tracks. Ain't that somethin'?
#8
Congrats on winning Writing of the Week. This eerie piece made me feel really quite peculiar so well done.
#9
congrats, i liked this as well, the stylistic jumbled-ness (or quirks, or whatever) was tight and well executed.
#10
This was fantastic.
マリ「しあわっせはーあるいってこないだーからあるいってゆっくんだねーん 
いっちにっちいっぽみーかでさんぽ
 さーんぽすすんでにっほさっがるー 
じーんせいはっわんつー!ぱんち・・・


"Success is as dangerous as failure. Hope is as hollow as fear." - from Tao Te Ching