#1
The worrying nature, that no one dared to understand,
appeared on a blurred lifetime - no one asked why.
I will never question it myself, if it doesn’t represent mine.

Where did our hours go? (Oh look)
another virtue rendered useless
by permanence.
But it’s okay -
it was never mine to begin with.
#2
Not really impressed. There just seems too stuff you can say about the subject.
Too short, not enough conveyed. Underwhelming


Just my opinion of course. No disrespect
#4
Love that you broke out of the typical mold, not a perfect but on the way there. Keep working and expanding and you'll get there.