The worrying nature, that no one dared to understand,
appeared on a blurred lifetime - no one asked why.
I will never question it myself, if it doesn’t represent mine.

Where did our hours go? (Oh look)
another virtue rendered useless
by permanence.
But it’s okay -
it was never mine to begin with.
Not really impressed. There just seems too stuff you can say about the subject.
Too short, not enough conveyed. Underwhelming

Just my opinion of course. No disrespect
Love that you broke out of the typical mold, not a perfect but on the way there. Keep working and expanding and you'll get there.