Hey I really enjoyed it actually, once it started rolling.
I also loved the xylophone part or whatever that was at 3:23 it was kinda radioheadisch
The only think that kinda sounded off to me was the initial solo. The idea is good but you need to perfect it a bit more, make it more fluent and more fitting. I liked the second solo though.
The singing was good, it fits the song

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1611029