#2
Nice I love the little guitar riff, and the song is solid. The singing works as well.

The guitar playing could use a little more tightness to it, and I believe there is a little too much empty space in it. This of course could be filled in with other instruments, and leads and what have you, but as a solo effort I believe you could have cut out about thirty seconds, and really not lost anything.

I would like to hear a better recording quality with overlaid guitar, and vocals. I'd like to see the lyrics as well.

But it is cool. It's kind of got a Chuck Ragan vibe to it.


if you don't mind
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1611466
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Last edited by Toadvine at Aug 7, 2013,