This is my favourite Andy James song! I can't believe no-one has commented on this yet.

Okay first off good job for even trying this song because as you know it's ****ing insane.

Your tone feels just completely wrong for this song to be honest, and your guitar sounds a bit out of tune.
We both know this needs dozens and dozens of more hours practice but hey, i couldn't do it any better. As i said, good job for giving it a shot because very few people would, come back to it in a few years i think then it'll be interesting to see how you've improved.