Very good dude! I love me some Dream Theater, haha. Your guitar work is superb. With DT songs, it's obviously a lot to remember when it comes to the guitar parts, but you nailed it. Tone is very good, not too loud or too soft, and the playing is clean. Excellent work on the solo! Very clean playing.

The vocal work is impressive! LaBrie's voice is hard to imitate, so I have to hand to you for doing so well.

The only negative thing I could think of is that in some parts there is some back round noise coming out of your amp (check 6:20, for example.) Otherwise there is nothing that I can see that really needs to be changed!

I also gave your video a 'thumbs-up', because this is an excellent cover of a difficult song and you deserve it. Keep it up man!

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