Hey all

It's been a while since I post on here but I finally got around to recording a few snippets here and there of some old songs I wrote (the original posts with GP files are on these forums somewhere) and I was hoping some of you vets might lend a hand at giving me some constructive criticism.

Here's 2 clips I've recorded thus far. Let me know what I can improve on as far as mixing etc. goes. I'd post screenshots of any eq'ing I did but I usually don't save my files in reaper.

Anyways, here they are

1) http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=12436368&q=hi&newref=1

2) http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=12418024&q=hi&newref=1

Any advice is welcomed. Thanks :]
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