NGD1313
left & leaving
Join date: Mar 2006
3,718 IQ
#1
you wake me
your voice a warm summer storm
keeping pace with the dreams
i never asked for and could not believe
black blood still in my teeth
as you shake the nettles from my hair
with painted white lightning
underneath your eyes.
in some forgotten language
we now remember how to speak -
you tell me nothing leaves and no one dies;
but somehow the truth still is a lie
and even if you never woke me at all
that still keeps me up at night.
vintage x metal
Brown-Thighed Girl
Join date: Sep 2006
5,308 IQ
#2
hey stranger. nice to see you back.


this could be even longer, especially with the rhyme scheme
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it's official, vintage x metal is the saving grace of this board and/or the antichrist




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theguitarist
minterman22
tateandlyle
& alaskan_ninja

BeatlesFan789
Registered User
Join date: Nov 2012
199 IQ
#3
I tried playing this out in my head (Though I probably played it wrong) and the lyrics work out very well. Nice work!
jiminizzle
Lost Pilot
Join date: May 2006
2,775 IQ
#4
lovely and integral in a grand scheme of similar things
Anatomy Anatomy
Whale Blue Review

Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me