I like the melody and chord progression for sure. It'd be cool if it was easier to hear what you were saying. It's just a small balance issue but try either projecting more or playing guitar more quietly. I like what I can hear of the song but I would like to easily be able to understand you.

You're a solid guitarist though and have a very listenable voice. Well done.
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Good job dude. I've never heard the song before but it sounds good! I agree with Artemis Entreri about the balance, but that's somewhat expected without singing into a mic.