#2
Hey man this was a cool cover. I can tell you practice a lot. My critique for you though would be that you kind of rushed a little bit especially around :28-:40ish. To fix this you should practice this to a metronome a little slower and then gradually bring it faster so you're on the beat more. Overall though I was very impressed!

Can you critique my singing voice on the recording in this post? It's also C4C. Thanks:
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=31797903#post31797903