Hi! Could yall listen to this song and critique me about my singing voice? In return I'll be more than happy to listen to your own material and give my opinion on that too. Judge my tone, sense of pitch, etc. Tell me what you like about my voice and what should be improved. I'm not really looking for a critique of the song itself because a full band rock version of it has already been recorded and released, but if you want to give tips on that too that's cool.

Here's the link to the song:

Go to 0:44 to fastforward to where I start singing.