Thank you for the review! Now your tune: sometimes the guitar playing sounds good, sometimes it is a little sloppy. I think the guitar riffs are good! Sometimes the vocals sound good, sometimes they are a bit pitchy. I can see someone thinking the synth sounds cheesy (I think I would have added stereo delay to it), though I still like it. Sometimes the cymbals are a little loud, otherwise the drums sound good! The song itself is well written. Rock on!