Hey guys. I don't like to post unfinished work, but I could use some feedback on this one:


Keep in mind, it's just a demo tune. I'm working on an album right now, and this will likely be on it, after I've polished it all up of course. Personally, I'm quite unhappy with the drums, so they're going to need some editing. And I have to add bass eventually.

SOOOO... I'm having trouble with the direction of this one... any feedback / criticism is necessary!
ROCK! \m/
Last edited by Caliryda at Aug 25, 2013,