#1
So I came up with words to this song, but I still haven't come up with a name to it. If you got any suggestions, please, tell me. Also no one wants to critisize my work, so I turned to the best music community I know.

Inside * * are screams, others vocals are either sung or spoken.
Verse 1:
*You rise, in pain
To strive, for the same
Revenge, in your mind
Some things you just can't hide
Everyone can see the fury rising up, in your body*
It gets in your head.
*Satisfaction, compensation, direct action, aggravation*
Another one is dead.

Chorus 1:
The life you thought was given,
was not enough, even,
we're always being thriven on and on.
You're dancing with your own self,
your death cards are now dealt,
They’re coming for your head right now

Aftersolo:
You don’t know how it’s like
Nobody looks the same anymore
While I strive forward,
I don’t know how to feel no more
Revenge is the only thing I have now
I can’t even see where I first left,
I close your eyes and continue my journey
The one that has no meaning anymore

Verse 2:
*You walk, on again
To fight, your own grave
Only fear, in your eyes
Some things you just can’t hide
No one else can see you running from this monsters killing fury*
It gets in your head
*Something hits you, all gets blurry*
Another one is dead.

Chorus 2:
The life you thought was given,
was not enough, even,
we're always being thriven on and on.
You're dancing with your own self,
your death cards are now dealt,
They’re coming for your head right now

Bridge:
They say that this life is just a pain,
But still they always run away,
As if it actually meant something to them,
And I hunt on, and on, and on, and on again.

Chorus 3:
The life you thought was given,
was not enough, even,
we're always being thriven on and on.
You're dancing with your own self,
your death cards are now dealt,
They’re coming for your head right now